Q1. Did students in the past have to wear school uniforms?
- 교정된 문장: In the past, students were required to wear school uniforms. There are several reasons for this, but the first that comes to mind is that uniforms create a sense of equality(평등한 느낌을 만든다) among students. They prevent students from noticing who is rich or poor(학생들은 누가 부자고 가난한지 알아차리는 것을 막아준다), allowing them to interact without being aware of differences in wealth. (그리고 부의 차이를 인지 하는 것 없이 서로 교류하게 한다.)
- 원래 내가 쓴 문장:
Students in the past were supposed to wear school uniforms. There are several reasons for this. But the first that comes up to my mind is that wearing a uniform makes equal atmosphere among students. Students cannot notice who is rich or poor, and they don't even recognize the concept of wealth in interacting with friends.
- Students cannot notice who is rich or poor --> 이것보다 They prevent them from noticing who is rich or poor 가 더 고급지네! Uniforms를 주어로 유지하면서 능동으로 말하는 방법인듯
- allow는 생각보다 make O O.V와 뜻이 비슷한듯